More Feedback On Blues

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  1. Narsh

    Narsh Well-Known Member

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    Hey guys,

    So I took all the wonderful critique I received and tried another take on "The Thrill is Gone".

    The primary focus on this one was:
    - Less Gain
    - Less in your face
    - More Dynamics
    - More Space
    - Let the tune breathe

    I think I did better than the first, but its still not quite there. Got some work to do, but its totally fun to be working on something different. I look forward to more critique.

     
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    I really like this one, it's raining, she's gone and the dog ain't feeling too good either.
     

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    B.B. King is up there somewhere smiling now.
     
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    Lovely - sounds mighty fine to my ears. You've really got those notes on a glide path ....!
     
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    That sounds great, nice resolves. You know, the one thing I hear in a lot of blues is repetition. I don’t know that I can make myself do that either, but it feel like I’m over thinking when I play. I really like what you have going on.


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    Thanks guys, this is so counter-intuitive for me. I really have to put effort into holding back.
     

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